Tuesday, March 28, 2006

my prose lines
hit hard like clotheslines

5 Comments:

Blogger D. Chandramohan said...

don't go calling your verse prose / that's like throwin' mud on a desert rose / even your unrhymed shit flows like milk / free verse is what it is; it's smooth as silk / you're a poet as well as revolutionary / "float like a butterfly sting like a bee"

::meh:: it's the best i could do at this hour - take it as a compliment.

...and let the rain bring with it a sense of - peace!

12:48 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I want to read some first person narritives!

4:27 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

anonymous about is Jason S

4:27 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

above*

4:27 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

A lot of your writing says to me that you've been hanging around guys disproportionately often ;p

12:48 AM  

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